Tuesday, July 26, 2011

ff-meri nanhi dulhan-114

Chapter ---114


Week passed geet is now 4 months pregnant''..
maan and geet were maintaining distance, 'but still pretending to be happy in front of all''
   But it was not easy for maan, as  its  very against of his nature  ,and  if he stays at home then he have to be a part of it. so to avoid it, he stayed mostly in office'.working  till late night to avoid all this fake drama... '

  on other hand,  both couples were romancing openly and enjoying  their married life fully,.. their togetherness was reminding geet, her close movements with maan  ... she too felt an urge to be in maan's arms'..but he was no where near her, whole weak'
she was still happy for her friends and trying hard to hide her loneliness from them''.'.
but vicky was clearly noticing  sadness behind her smile'''.
he even tried to talk with  her about all this'
but she made excuses every time'..
Sunday morning:
kitchen,.

. geet is Cooking all maan's favorite dishes and was very excited, to spend time with maan..as its Sunday so she was expecting him to be   at home
hallphone rang'
.vicky picks ph'papa.. How are you..
maan, prem were also  in hall'they turned to him '
while geet heer and prachi comes from kitchen'.
vicky'kya .? .theek hai ..I will inform to all,'
yeah we all are fine ,'geet bhi theek hai'..
'you take care,'bye''he disconnects call'.

all looks at him questioningly'
vicky'papa ne kaha'.
prem and heer family are still little upset. .papa said he will meet them, few more times 'and will convince them before coming back '.and he even said there is nothing to worry. .he will take care of every thing'
geet smiles ---my papa is great..
prem and vicky smiles at her ..
while maan gives her a glare  and got up  to leave..

prem'hey maan where are you going
maan'office..
its Sunday maan
haa office main bahut kaam hai''with that he left
geet's face fell, but she quickly covers it with a smile'and turns to leave when vicky pulls her  ,'
what is going on between you and bhai'
geet---what are you talking vicky'


heer and prachi were helping her and same time teasing her'.
Vicky---don't try to hide from me geet'I am noticing it from many days'
geet frees her hand from his grip and moves ahead.. aisa kuch nahi hai..
we are very happy,.. maan is just little busy with office work'
papa bhi yaha nahi hai'so he has lot of responsibility now'
vicky---aacha itne busy hai ki Sunday bhi office ja rahe hai'
geet'haa vicky, he is very busy'
vicky'geet we all know, bhai avoids you and concentrate more on work only when he is angry'.morning he is going early and returning late at nights, and now even working on Sunday..
geet---aisa kuch nahi hai vicky,'If  I  stop him he will not  go but I don't want to stop him''.work come first'so you stop doubting us'.
vicky--why don't you clear my doubt '
kaise?
vicky---bhai ko office jane se rok'..

she smiles nervously vicky  I said I don't want..
vicky---ok still  do it for my sake'..
geet----Fine.. What is big deal in it''
vicky---then go on,'
she left from there towards maan's room''.
and very hesitatingly enters room'

she stood behind maan,playing with her dupatta Nervously
,..
vicky  takes prem with him and went  hiding behind wall of maan's room'..
'maan was changing shirt 'he felt her presence, but didn't looked at her'kya hai''
geet'was about to reply, ,when she notice, vicky and prem  out of door.. she comes in front of maan,. Trying to indicate him, towards door'
but maan turns away, avoiding to look at her, as he was missing her so much that is scared to loose himself by her one look.'geet maine poocha kya chahye..?
She hesitatingly answers. I don't want you to go office today'..
it angers him' why should I do what you want , when you never care what I want or desire' ''.
both  vicky and prem exchanges worried looks '
geet tries to cover his words ..haa baba I know what you want . she inch closer to maan and slides her hand in his hairs bending him down to her 'he looks at her shocked before he react to it... she captures his lips, sealing his lips and stopping him from speaking..

(precap---maan and geet patch up.. )

21 comments:

  1. i luv dis stry yaaar.. u r 2 gud... plz plz nxt update jaldi doh na plz... wtngggggggggggg

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  2. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update jaldi se de do wait ni ho raha:(

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  3. kb update kro gi?
    aur kitna wait krn hoga?

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  4. i can't wait... was so involved in the story! nicely written! good luck! hoping for more updates...

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  5. hi i am very new reader 4 this ff.
    u write so ammzing ff. so awesome
    i hope it`s not finished jet
    u r still updating this .so many fights
    so many misunderstandings , still so
    much love to. still this ff is awesome
    please update soo.add me in ur pm

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  6. hi i just checking .
    after july u never update
    so may be u not updating
    if u reading this please
    come back.

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  7. the theme of your story is really good...please continue the story soon.

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  8. jst read d stry till pt-114 & loved dis Maaneet bt plzzz jaldi MU dur kardo...... will be waiting eagerly.....

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  9. Just read all parts of the story its amazing plz update soon

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  10. i am new reader,,,,,very nice concept,,,,waitng for the nxt updates

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  11. i love this story, please write the rest of the story. Thanks. i noticed you did not write since 2011.

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  12. plzzz continue ur story its amaizing

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  13. Its upto only parts 114...yaar its awsome story..pls plz plz plz update next parts...m addicted to it

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  14. Hii I'm new reader.. Love dis story.. It's awasom story.. Y u not updating.. Plz cm back na nd updt soon.

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  15. helloo...i am new reader and the story was awesome.....plss update

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  16. Dear uploader,
    Plzzzzz continue this story. I m waiting for this ff from sooo long but till now there are no additional updates...
    Plzzzz upload the other parts..
    We will be waiting!!!!!!

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  17. its really unfair as u just stopped this plz continue

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  18. Pls continue it how many years passed and we are waiting for it

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  19. Plzzz continue it how many years has passed when u have updated ur story plz..... we r waiting for it

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